Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jennifer McKelvie

135 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Claims 73%Reasoning 17%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 54 wordsMay is Multiple Sclerosis Awareness Month, a time for the MS community to come together and raise awareness about this neurological disease.1 Canadians are wearing carnations today because they are a symbol of hope for the MS community. Everyone’s experience with the disease is different. The symptoms, severity and effectiveness of treatment can vary, Reasoning · 11 wordswhich is why the work of MS Canada is so important. Claims · 31 wordsCanada has one of the highest rates of multiple sclerosis in the world, with more than 90,000 Canadians living with this disease, including my mother, who has been paralyzed by MS.23 Reasoning · 12 wordsThis is a pivotal moment for Canada to invest in MS research. Claims · 13 wordsThe latest science provides hope that MS can be prevented in our lifetime. The ask · 14 wordsLet us work together to build a stronger future for Canadians with multiple sclerosis.Vague promise

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