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Michelle Rempel Garner

198 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
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Claims 66%Positioning 9%Reasoning 15%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordsthe Prime Minister claims to have taken back control of the immigration system, 1Positioning · 7 wordsbut that is really hard to believe.Positioning Claims · 118 wordsThat is because in the past year, the Prime Minister has allowed the government to let in hundreds of thousands of new non-citizen temporary foreign workers while Canadian kids cannot find jobs or a place to rent.2 The Liberals have allowed massive, scandalous fraud to run rampant in the non-citizen student visa program. They have turned a blind eye to non-citizens convicted of serious crimes in Canada, who are getting sweetheart deals to avoid deportation. They have lost track of millions of non-citizens who have no legal reason to be in Canada, and they are issuing visas to terrorists. The immigration minister told us she meets with the Prime Minister on a weekly basis to discuss her file.3 Reasoning · 30 wordsThat must mean that she is following his orders. There is no other plausible reason that a minister with this many failures under her belt would still have her job. Positioning · 11 wordsThe reality is that the buck stops with the Prime Minister.PositioningUnearned certainty The ask · 19 wordsHe needs to fire her and fix the system, not claim that everything is okay when it is not.

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