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Steven MacKinnon

59 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Dominique Vien (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, while Quebeckers are cutting back on their groceries to make ends meet, we found out that the Prime Minister spent a cool $524,000 on food aboard his plane. How can the Prime Minister still look Canadians in the eye and talk to them about inflation when he spends the equivalent of several years of a family’s wages on a single flight, while adding to their grocery bills with his fuel tax?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 73%Positioning 27%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 43 wordsspeaking of airplanes, the Prime Minister is in Mirabel this afternoon to announce the largest order in our country’s history for airplanes designed, built and delivered by Canada.1 This is excellent news for Quebec. It is excellent news for the workers in Mirabel. Positioning · 16 wordsIt is a strong vote of confidence in the strength and vitality of the Canadian economy.PositioningOff point

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