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Steven MacKinnon

74 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, a month ago today, Donald Trump made utterly indefensible changes to his tariffs. Desjardins has shown that Quebeckers are the ones paying the price. Quebec is being hit twice as hard as the rest of the country. A quarter of our manufactured goods are now affected. The employers of 170,000 Quebeckers have been targeted since April 6. That is why Quebeckers need a wage subsidy, to protect jobs and offer businesses some relief. We have been asking for this for a month now. When is the government going to take action?”
Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 85%Procedure 7%Positioning 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 23 wordswe just announced one-time assistance.1 It consists of cashflow support for manufacturers and SMEs affected by the U.S. administration’s unfair and unjustified tariffs.2 Procedure · 5 wordsToday, we have good news.Procedure Claims · 33 wordsAs I just mentioned, the Prime Minister is in Mirabel right now to announce the largest aircraft order in Canadian history.34 The aircraft is one designed and built here in Canada by Canadians.5 Positioning · 6 wordsWe are extremely proud of that.Positioning Claims · 7 wordsThat is going to help Quebec’s economy.Partly on point

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