“Mr. Speaker, I have breaking news. Reports say that Honda has scrapped plans to build a new $15-billion EV plant in Alliston, at the cost of thousands of jobs. This is a direct result of Liberal policies that forced Canadian automakers to make cars that Canadians do not want. They are now spending $2.3 billion to fund rebates on foreign-made EVs. With no consumer demand and no CUSMA deal in sight, it is no wonder manufacturers are walking away. Why are Canadian auto workers paying the price for the Liberals’ failed auto policies?”
Statement grade
B+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 65%Positioning 22%Procedure 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 40 wordswe know that tariffs are affecting the industry globally, but we also know that we have a very strong plant in Alliston, with 4,100 workers.1They recently rolled off their 11 millionth car, making the popular CR-V and Civic brands.2Positioning · 12 wordsWe also know that we need to be there for our sector, PositioningClaims · 8 wordswhich is why we are investing in workers.Vague promisePositioning · 6 wordsWe are embracing a sustainable future, PositioningClaims · 6 wordsand we are attracting new investment, Vague promiseProcedure · 11 wordswhich I will be happy to get into in the supplementary.Procedure