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Wayne Long

69 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Juanita Nathan (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the seniors in our country are the very people who built the communities we live in today, who raised families, strengthened our economy and shaped the Canada we are so proud of. They deserve to age with dignity, security and peace of mind. In Pickering—Brooklin, our seniors are concerned about affordability and ensuring they receive the benefits they rely on. Can the secretary of state update Canadians on how our government is supporting seniors and protecting them from financial vulnerability?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Aside 28%Thanks 30%Promise 42%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 19 wordswe have so many members on this side that it is hard to keep track of where everyone is.Aside Thanks · 21 wordsI want to thank the member for Pickering—Brooklin for the great work she does and for recognizing seniors across this country.Thanks Promise · 29 wordsCanada’s new government is committed to ensuring that seniors age with dignity.Partly on pointVague promise We are going to make it easier for seniors to access the benefits they are entitled to.Vague promise

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