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Yasir Naqvi

109 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Alex Ruff (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Bruce County and Grey County beef farmers have publicly expressed concerns about the ongoing negotiations with Mercosur. They said, “This won’t just hurt farmers—it will weaken rural communities and reduce Canada’s ability to produce its own food.... In Ontario...where most imported beef enters the market, the impact on local farmers would be severe.” Canadian beef producers are waiting to get more access in markets across the world. Should the Liberal government not be prioritizing export market access abroad instead of displacing the Canadian cattle industry at home?”
Statement grade
B
79 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 78%Positioning 6%Promise 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 7 wordsthat is precisely what we are doing. Positioning · 6 wordsWe are living in uncertain times, PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 78 wordsand our focus is on creating more opportunities for Canadian businesses, including our hard-working farmers, to be able to export around the world.Vague promise In fact, if we talk to farmers, we hear that they are very excited about the opportunities we are creating for them in India, China, the Philippines and other ASEAN countries, 1and places like Mercosur. We are working closely with our farmers.Vague promise We are working closely with our industries. We are listening to their views, Promise · 18 wordsand our negotiations will reflect the needs of Canadians so we can create good-paying jobs for all Canadians.Vague promise

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