“Mr. Speaker, my riding is proudly home to the largest lobster fishery in Canada, which creates thousands of good-paying jobs throughout Acadie—Annapolis. Our harvesters need safe and secure small craft harbours in order for their product to make it to markets. Can the Minister of Fisheries tell me how the spring economic update will affect seafood producers?”
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Claims 47%Positioning 53%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 8 wordsfisheries infrastructure will ensure our communities stay strong.Positioning · 9 wordsWe are building Canada and our coastal communities strong.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise