Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Michael Guglielmin

187 words · 13 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
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Procedure 5%Claims 66%Reasoning 12%Positioning 10%Promise 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI rise to recognize something truly special happening in Vaughan—Woodbridge.Procedure Claims · 43 wordsI recently launched a youth advisory council, 1and the response has been remarkable. Young people in our community are stepping up. They are showing up and saying, “We care about the future of this country, and we want a seat at the table.” Reasoning · 17 wordsThat is exactly the spirit that builds Canada, and that spirit is alive and well in Woodbridge. Claims · 81 wordsAfter more than a decade of Liberal government, our young people are worried. They are worried about crime in their neighbourhoods and the rise of artificial intelligence. They are wondering what AI means for the future and its impact on jobs. They look at this country, and they wonder if the cultural fabric can still hold together. Many of them have stopped believing they will ever own a home or raise a family in the communities that they grew up in. Positioning · 19 wordsThat is not the Canada we promised them, and that is not the Canada we are willing to accept.Positioning Promise · 12 wordsI want to hear the voice of every young person in Vaughan—Woodbridge. Reasoning · 5 wordsThey deserve to be heard.

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