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Amanpreet Gill

160 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

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Claims 76%Thanks 19%Greeting 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 121 wordswith over 100,000 people expected to gather in Calgary this week, the Nagar Kirtan, organized by the Dashmesh Culture Centre gurdwara, stands as one of the most anticipated Sikh celebrations in our country.12 It is a powerful public expression of faith, humility and the principle of seva, which is selfless service to all of humanity. Led by President Harpal Singh Grewal, the DCC has built a legacy of service that extends far beyond celebration.3 Through their no hungry tummy initiative and food bank operations, they feed thousands of Calgarians facing food insecurity, regardless of background, belief or faith.4 The DCC reminds us that true faith is expressed not only in prayers, but in action by showing up for neighbours in need. Thanks · 31 wordsI invite all members to join me in congratulating the director of operations Raj Sidhu, the entire DCC committee, all volunteers and the Sikh community of Calgary on this joyous occasion.5Thanks Greeting · 8 wordsWaheguru Ji Ka Khalsa, Waheguru Ji Ki Fateh.Greeting

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