Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Ron McKinnon

114 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Anecdote 33%Claims 35%Thanks 15%The ask 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 38 wordsI wish to inform the House that on Friday, April 24, I was arrested by the Coquitlam RCMP.1 The crime was drinking too much coffee while on House duty. I pleaded guilty. I was cuffed for a cure.Anecdote Claims · 40 wordsCuffed for a Cure is the lighter side of Cops for Cancer. The harder side is the cycling. Each year, officers across Canada cycle hundreds of kilometres raising funds for life-saving childhood cancer research and supporting families facing the unimaginable.2 Thanks · 17 wordsTheir commitment reflects the very best of our community: compassion, resilience and a deep sense of service.Thanks The ask · 19 wordsI encourage all Canadians to support Cops for Cancer and to help ensure that no child faces cancer alone.

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