Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 33%Claims 35%Thanks 15%The ask 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 38 wordsI wish to inform the House that on Friday, April 24, I was arrested by the Coquitlam RCMP.1The crime was drinking too much coffee while on House duty.I pleaded guilty.I was cuffed for a cure.AnecdoteClaims · 40 wordsCuffed for a Cure is the lighter side of Cops for Cancer.The harder side is the cycling.Each year, officers across Canada cycle hundreds of kilometres raising funds for life-saving childhood cancer research and supporting families facing the unimaginable.2Thanks · 17 wordsTheir commitment reflects the very best of our community: compassion, resilience and a deep sense of service.ThanksThe ask · 19 wordsI encourage all Canadians to support Cops for Cancer and to help ensure that no child faces cancer alone.