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Steven MacKinnon

88 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Cathay Wagantall (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Liberal government, our Canadian Forces’ morale has been attacked, traditions have been erased and attrition has become highly damaging to our capability to defend Canada. The Canadian Forces’ Snowbirds must continue to be the souls of our Canadian military. They exude Canadian pride and international reputation for expertise, precision and high standards that have given our allies confidence in us in the past. Will the Liberals do the right thing and save our souls, save our Snowbirds?”
Statement grade
C
Average 62 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 38%Positioning 62%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Promise · 33 wordsthe minister has spoken very eloquently about our need to be the adults, to be responsible and keep our pilots safe, and that is exactly what we are going to continue to do.Vague promise Positioning · 55 wordsHowever, it is the temerity, the gall of the Conservatives to stand in this House, the 0.99% of GDP crew here, giving lectures.1 We will take no lessons on defence spending, on defence investments, on investments in our veterans, on investments in our armed forces and equipping our men and women in uniform. Those Conservatives— PositioningOff pointSome hon. members: Oh, oh!

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