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Steven MacKinnon

80 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Don Davies (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals’ privatization agenda is disturbing and dangerous. They are planning to sell off Canada’s ports and airports, strategic assets that will end up in the hands of foreign buyers, compromising our security. When Heathrow was privatized in the U.K., it resulted in Saudi Arabia, Qatar and China controlling major stakes in that airport. Passengers paid more and services declined. Will the Prime Minister commit to keeping Canada’s ports and airports in public hands, or will he sell our sovereignty to the highest bidder?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 10%Promise 90%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 8 wordsthe Government of Canada is exploring all possibilities, Vague promisePromise · 72 wordsbut one thing we will not compromise on is that we want to actually improve the travel experience and keep air travel in this vast and beautiful land accessible to all.Vague promise We want to make sure that pricing continues to favour Canadians’ ability to move around the country.Vague promise We want to explore all possibilities in terms of safety, accessibility and making travel a responsive, comfortable, good and positive experience for all Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise

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