“Mr. Speaker, I am really curious about the member’s brother who served in the air force. I would love to have a conversation with him around the Snowbirds and encourage the Liberals’ support. They are such a wonderful representation to young people who would also like to join the air force. I want to note one thing from the British Columbia Supreme Court when it released its decision. It concluded that the Cowichan Tribes hold aboriginal title to a portion of their lands, including private lands held in fee simple. Justice Young made a number of findings and issued a series of declarations that, according to— An hon. member: Oh, oh! Cathay Wagantall: Sir. I am speaking to the member. He is not even listening. An hon. member: Yes, he is. An hon. member: No, you’re talking to him. Some hon. members: Oh, oh! Mr. Speaker, here is the part that I would like him to respond to because they are blaming us on this side of the House for causing the angst. Justice Young made a number of findings and issued a series of declarations that, according to aboriginal legal experts and academics, create significant uncertainty for fee simple title holders in the province of British Columbia—”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 68. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 17%Claims 79%Positioning 4%Procedure 1%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 22 wordswe spoke about the value of Canada, and of course I spoke about my family’s service to Canada in the Snowbird response.AnecdoteClaims · 82 wordsWith my brother having been a flight engineer with the Royal Canadian Air Force for 26 years, I think we should never put any pilots or any of our service members in older aircraft that may not be safe.1I would also dare say, with all the information that we have agreed to in terms of strengthening and protecting Canada more, to pay attention to that perspective as well.The Snowbirds have the opportunity to showcase more of what they can do.Positioning · 5 wordsThe minister is absolutely correct.PositioningClaims · 23 wordsThey have a great history, and they are going to always make sure they do Canada proud in many ways, shapes and forms.Off pointProcedure · 1 wordsModernizing—Procedure