Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Kevin Lamoureux

1050 words · 59 sentences · 78 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Greeting 1%Thanks 2%Positioning 13%Procedure 5%Claims 52%Reasoning 23%Anecdote 1%Aside 1%Promise 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 11 wordsit is a pleasure to rise and speak to Bill C-230.Greeting Thanks · 14 wordsI referred to the efforts by the member opposite in bringing forward the legislation.Thanks Positioning · 40 wordsThe government sees the legislation, as amended, as very much part of what the government wants to see happen: more accountability, more transparency and protecting the integrity of the CRA and the system, because it is of the utmost importance.Positioning Procedure · 37 wordsThe issue of collaboration was referred to, in the form of a question. I like to think that in the last week or so, we have debated private members’ bills. Today, we are talking about Bill C-230.Procedure Claims · 46 wordsBailey’s law was passed.1 We had another Conservative piece of legislation, just yesterday, that we were okay with going to committee, and that was with regard to silver alerts.2Off point Today, we are talking about another important piece of legislation. The principles behind it are very sound. Reasoning · 106 wordsAt the end of the day, Canadians do not mind paying taxes, as long as there is a sense of integrity within the system and, most importantly, a sense of fairness. People are prepared to pay taxes as long as they feel they are fair and equitable. We often talk about taxes. People are very much concerned nowadays about how the government might be able to assist with affordability. The importance of taxation policy is absolutely critical during different types of business cycles that a nation goes through. That is one of the reasons we have to have the confidence of the citizenry regarding taxation policy.Partly on point Claims · 65 wordsIn this case, just over a year ago, the Prime Minister, for example, gave tax relief on the carbon tax.3 That was followed by a substantial tax cut that provided support for 22 million people.5 We have the GST rebate being converted to the groceries and essentials benefit program.8 Eleven million Canadians are going to benefit from that.6Off point Taxation policy makes a difference and matters. Reasoning · 19 wordsThat is not possible unless we have the confidence of Canadians that the system is fair, accountable and transparent. Positioning · 13 wordsThis is what the government has focused a great deal of attention on.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 7 wordsBill C-230 would add value to that. Anecdote · 15 wordsI had the opportunity, over the last week or so, to amplify the word “collaboration”.Anecdote Positioning · 28 wordsThe government is very focused on recognizing where there is value in private members’ bills, and we look to the Conservatives recognizing the same thing in government bills.Positioning Reasoning · 28 wordsWhere there is value, we should try to get bills through the House and into committee, allow them to get through third reading and, ultimately, pass the legislation. Claims · 70 wordsCanadians want parliamentarians of different political stripes to work together, recognize where we can make a social policy change, shift or modification, whatever it might be, and act on it. That is exactly what is happening here this evening.Partly on point We now have before us legislation that would ensure more accountability for corporations that write off money owed to the CRA.4 Uncollected money owed to the CRA impacts our general revenues. Reasoning · 32 wordsThere is an obligation for government to show transparency where it can and, at the same time, respect privacy law concerns. We need to be sensitive to the privacy laws we have. Claims · 72 wordsThe legislation before us deals with that. It would allow the CRA, and the government ultimately, to provide more information. I believe there was an amendment brought forward with respect to the threshold. I am not 100% sure, but I think it is around the $2-million mark.7 That means having that registry, having that data. Information is so critically important not only from a government perspective but also from an opposition perspective. Reasoning · 35 wordsIf it is done the way it could be done, the real winners are actually the taxpayers because they should have that sense of taxation policy and where it is that we are falling short. Claims · 111 wordsWhen we think of corporations and small businesses in general, a vast majority pay their taxes at the appropriate time. They pay their debts and make sure, through those contributions, that we all benefit as a society. In regard to accountability and transparency, there is a percentage there, a very real and tangible percentage, where a significant amount of revenue is in fact lost. A better understanding of where that is coming from, as it could be the types of companies or all sorts of things, can be drawn out if that information is made available, while at the same time privacy laws are respected. We would all benefit from that. Positioning · 56 wordsFor the Government of Canada and particularly our new Prime Minister, the issue of accountability and transparency applies to government expenditures and the collection of the finances we get in many different forms. It is being responsible with tax dollars. It is ensuring that smart decisions are in fact being made on behalf of the taxpayer.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 70 wordsIt is recognizing that when the registry is fully operational there is likely going to be a great deal of attention drawn to it. That attention is not going to be all good. We recognize that in government. However, we have standing committees that can contribute in a very positive way by going through the types of documents we would be able to draw out, which can improve the system. Procedure · 17 wordsI realize my time is coming to an end, but I want to emphasize one other thing, ProcedureThanks · 10 wordswhich is the incredible people who work for the CRA.Thanks Claims · 45 wordsThe Canada Revenue Agency is second to no other agency in the world, I would argue, in terms of the degree to which it supports private individuals, the people we represent, and the businesses and so forth. It is an incredible task its workers have. Aside · 8 wordsIt is something I personally would not want, AsideClaims · 58 wordsbut I applaud the efforts that, I would argue, 90% plus put in day in and day out so that governments at different levels are able to have the monies necessary to provide absolutely essential services, like health care, or supports to grow the economy, all of which are absolutely critical and the reason taxes are so important.Partly on point Reasoning · 26 wordsAt the end of the day, we want transparency and accountability. We want the taxpayers to know they have a system they can have confidence in. Promise · 11 wordsThis government will always push for people paying their fair share.Vague promise

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