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James Bezan

173 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I must say I am not surprised, but I am disappointed in the Conservatives for their position on Bill C-11. I think they undervalue the tremendous work that former Justice Arbour did in providing the recommendations that the essence of the legislation is all about. There were 48 recommendations. I believe 36 of them have already been implemented. At the core is the transfer of cases from military authorities to civil justice authorities. That is the very core. Arbour met with hundreds if not, indirectly, thousands of individuals, everyone from victims to advocates. She herself, who is going to be our next governor general, is recognized around the world as someone who has incredible credentials. Why is the Conservative Party not agreeing with those recommendations and the essence of the Arbour report?”
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Average 89 / 100
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Positioning 14%Claims 86%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 25 wordsI am always disappointed with the member for Winnipeg North.Positioning He does not listen to anyone because he is always too busy flapping his lips.Off pointMockery Claims · 148 wordsIf he actually read the testimony we had at the national defence committee, if he had actually heard from victims, they would all have told him that things have changed since Arbour did her report seven years ago.1 She did all her interviews, she wrote her report, and it was not accepted by the government until five years ago.2 The director of military prosecutions within the Canadian Armed Forces even said that he gave the directive to start doing concurrent prosecutions, allowing victims to choose to go into the civilian system.3 Here we are five years later, and he said that if it was not for Bill C-11, he would have rescinded that order because the Canadian Armed Forces are doing a better job at prosecuting those cases, 4and victims are telling us that the Canadian Armed Forces are doing a better job of prosecuting those cases than—

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