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Juanita Nathan

169 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

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Positioning 13%Claims 54%Anecdote 5%Reasoning 16%The ask 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsMay 18 is not just a date on a calendar. For Tamil Canadians, it is a wound that has never fully healed.Positioning Claims · 44 wordsSeventeen years ago, the Sri Lankan civil war ended in a final offensive that claimed the lives of tens of thousands of Tamil civilians in a matter of weeks.12 Hundreds of thousands were displaced.3 The wounds, psychological, familial and cultural, persist to this day. Anecdote · 9 wordsAs someone with Tamil roots, I carry this history.Anecdote Claims · 48 wordsTamil Canadians across the country carry it, too, in the names of relatives they never got to say goodbye to and in the trauma passed silently between generations. Tamil Canadians across the country are asking for the truth to be spoken here, in the House, where it matters. Reasoning · 27 wordsWe remember on May 18, Tamil Genocide Remembrance Day, because memory is resistance and because silence encourages those who would repeat these horrors elsewhere in the world. The ask · 19 wordsI call on the the government and all members to stand with Tamil Canadians across the nation this month.

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