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Jennifer McKelvie

105 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Shannon Stubbs (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, these guys are so out of touch, they just do not give a rip about what Canadians are actually going through. Last fall, the Prime Minister told young Canadians they would have to “make sacrifices”. Well, he sure did mean it, did he not? New numbers show youth unemployment is at 14.3%. Young Canadians now face the toughest job market on record and struggle to afford rent, groceries and textbooks. No wonder young men and women lose hope. How can they ever get ahead? Young Canadians pay the highest price for Liberal debt, deficits and costly credit card budgets that mortgage their futures. Over a year in, how much more will the PM force young Canadians to sacrifice and suffer?”
Statement grade
D–
43 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 17%Claims 58%The question 25%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordson this side of the House we believe now is the time to invest and build our communities.Positioning Claims · 10 wordsWe are creating jobs while building housing and building infrastructure.Partly on pointVague promise The question · 19 wordsI wonder if our colleague from Alberta could let us know what projects she would cut from our budget. Claims · 51 wordsIs it the investment to rural communities across Alberta to expand fleets and transit services, and plan for the future? Is it the new Japanese community centre in Calgary?2 Is it $3 million to improve treatment services at the Conklin water treatment plant in the Regional Municipality of Wood Buffalo, Alberta?1 The question · 7 wordsWhat would the Conservatives plan to cut?Off point

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