“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals speak of their latest programs, but the investors have already given us their verdict. Capital is leaving this country at a record pace. Our investment per worker is the lowest in the G7. In a country that needs millions of homes, 100,000 skilled tradespeople cannot find a project to work on. A country is not built by speeches, MOUs and press releases. It is built by employers willing to invest here, and they are choosing to invest elsewhere. When will the Prime Minister fix the conditions that have driven investment, jobs and opportunity out of this country?”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 69. The grade is held to 68, 30 above Relevance.
68 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 30 wordsbefore I came to this place, I taught undergraduate students for 15 years, and I know the number that COVID did and now the trade war is doing on them.AnecdotePositioning · 13 wordsWhat do we do when a number is being done on young people?PositioningOff pointReasoning · 13 wordsWe build them up and help them with hard skills and soft skills.Claims · 36 wordsThat is why we have the team Canada strong plan with 100,000 apprenticeships.1This summer we have 32,000 jobs with Statistics Canada in the census, a project that the party opposite would be first to cancel.2Reasoning · 20 wordsThat is how we build up the skills to get the kinds of careers that our students want and need, Positioning · 9 wordsand that is why we are there for them.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise