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Kevin Lamoureux

102 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Roman Baber (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the member should tell that to the 2.2 million Canadians at the food bank. The Liberals’ $1 trillion of new debt means less growth and fewer jobs. In April, Canada lost 18,000 jobs. The unemployment rate is up. In the first four months of this year, Canada lost 111,000 full-time jobs. Youth unemployment is at 14.3%. Young Canadians already cannot afford rent, groceries or homes. Now they cannot even find a job. Liberal insiders are getting rich while Canadians are getting poor. Will the Liberal government stop maxing out the national credit card so Canadians can afford the basic necessities of life?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 37%Procedure 11%Claims 33%Promise 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsthe Conservatives talk about jobs, but in reality, they do not want us to do anything.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty Procedure · 6 wordsListen to what the Conservatives say.Procedure Positioning · 6 wordsTheir policies, in one word, suck.PositioningOff point Procedure · 5 wordsLet me tell members something.Procedure Claims · 34 wordsWhen we look at what this government has done over the last year, we see that we have been building major projects, looking to expand export opportunities and bringing billions of dollars in investment.1 Promise · 19 wordsThose things are going to create the jobs that Canadians want, not only today, but also into the future.Partly on point Positioning · 16 wordsIt is time the Conservative Party wake up, get on side and be a little more—PositioningOff point

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