Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Todd Doherty

594 words · 36 sentences · 38 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Thanks 23%Positioning 6%Claims 64%Reasoning 2%Procedure 1%Promise 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 82 wordsI started off by saying I wanted to thank our colleagues who have all spoken on the bill, specifically the member for Barrie South—Innisfil, for his service, and the member for Prince George—Peace River—Northern Rockies. Through a tremendously hard time in our nation, his leadership on the ground within his community of Tumbler Ridge has been really remarkable. He has been there for the families. He has been there for the community. He has been there for the nation. I thank him.Thanks Positioning · 25 wordsWhy are we here? Why are we here if we cannot stand up for those who actually stand up for us and fight for us?Positioning Claims · 161 wordsWe are here for the 500,000 nurses in our country, the 40,000 paramedics, the 100,000 firefighters, the 25,000 correctional officers and the hundreds of thousands of first responders who put on their uniforms every day, not knowing what they are going to endure in their service to our country, to members’ families or to mine.1 They are all asking for one thing, to pass Bill S-233, to put protections in place so that they know that if they face violence when they respond to an incident, we have their backs. For 10 years, the IAFF has been asking for this.2 It has been their number one lobby ask.3 For seven years, we have been fighting to get a piece of legislation through.4 I am embarrassed that we are here at this point. We had a bill that passed unanimously in the House and that passed in the other House but, 5because of the dissolution of Parliament, it did not become law. Thanks · 9 wordsI want to thank Senator Housakos and Senator Yussuff.Thanks Claims · 23 wordsSenators from both sides came together last fall, saw the importance of the bill and passed it on all sides in the Senate.6 Thanks · 47 wordsI want to thank my friend Paul Hills, from the Saskatoon Paramedics Association and the IAFF, who has tirelessly worked to get a piece of legislation through, a piece of legislation that would protect his colleagues in the hospitals and on the front lines as first responders.Thanks Claims · 59 wordsThey face unbelievable acts of violence. The bill has already been studied twice. It is born of the 2019 HESA report, entitled “Violence Facing Health Care Workers in Canada”.7 It was studied in the last Parliament at both levels, the Senate and the House.8 Amendments were made that are reflected in the bill that we have today, Bill S-233.9 Positioning · 13 wordsIt is so frustrating for me that we are here at this point.Positioning Claims · 115 wordsLast fall, the gallery was full of firefighters and health care workers. We thought that we had support from the House to pass this. Before I stood to ask for it, I was told it was not going to happen. I literally stood in front of the House leader, who is in the House right now and I begged and said that I do not care who asks. It could be from their side, our side or anybody’s side. I do not care who asks for unanimous consent. All I care about is that the bill passes and that we can tell the firefighters, the first responders and the nurses that we have their backs. Reasoning · 13 wordsThat is what we owe to the hundreds of thousands of first responders. Procedure · 6 wordsI will just end with this.Procedure Claims · 20 wordsI carry a coin with me. It says that heroes are human, service before self and to never give up. Promise · 21 wordsI firmly believe and hope that when this comes to a vote in two days, all members will support the bill.

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