Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Kurt Holman

186 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 94 / 100
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Claims 34%Reasoning 31%The ask 22%Positioning 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 46 wordsin the most recent unemployment numbers, London has climbed to 9.2%, remaining the highest in Canada.1 Behind these numbers are people sending out résumés and hearing nothing back, parents trying to stretch every dollar further and young people wondering whether opportunity is moving out of reach. Reasoning · 58 wordsJust an hour from the U.S. border, London is the canary in the coal mine. When things go wrong, Londoners are the first to feel it, and it hits our community the hardest, but this is not just a London issue. What we are seeing in our community is a warning sign for the rest of the country. The ask · 41 wordsOn behalf of all Londoners who are worried about their jobs, their bills and their future, I urge the Liberals to get serious and focus on creating the conditions for Canadian businesses to compete, invest, grow, and create private sector jobs. Claims · 18 wordsConservatives are calling for lower taxes, less red tape and the trade deal the Liberal Prime Minister promised. Positioning · 23 wordsLondon is sounding the alarm. Londoners, especially those of London—Fanshawe, are seeing these concerns all around them. When will the Liberals finally listen?Positioning

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