A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 69%Reasoning 12%Positioning 11%Promise 8%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 63 wordsthe dental care plan is having a real impact on the lives of Canadians.Across our beautiful country, 4.3 million people have received dental care since the program’s launch, 1and over 21,000 residents in Pierrefonds—Dollard are benefiting from the plan.2This week at my constituency office, we are hosting our fourth open house to help residents renew and enrol in their dental coverage.3Reasoning · 17 wordsOral health is a fundamental right.That is why our team is there to provide individual support.Positioning · 16 wordsPrograms like the dental care plan show what we can achieve when we put Canadians first.PositioningClaims · 9 wordsCanadians no longer have to compromise on dental care.Promise · 12 wordsOur government will continue to work to improve everyone’s quality of life.Vague promiseClaims · 26 wordsThis week, from 10 a.m. to 3 p.m., residents of Pierrefonds—Dollard are welcome to drop by my office without an appointment to renew their dental plan.4