Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Sébastien Lemire

183 words · 13 sentences · 14 clauses

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Claims 42%Thanks 40%Procedure 4%Aside 2%Positioning 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 58 wordsI can hardly contain my excitement over the Montreal Victoire winning their very first Walter Cup.1 Our champions defeated the Ottawa Charge by a score of 4 to 0.2 This is the first time in the short history of the Professional Women’s Hockey League that the cup has been won by a team north of the U.S. border.3 Thanks · 56 wordsAll Quebeckers are celebrating alongside our captain, the GOAT and playoff MVP Marie‑Philip Poulin, 4and Laura Stacey. All Quebeckers were on the edge of their seats, cheering on Ann-Renée Desbiens for her shutout and Catherine Dubois, Alexandra Labelle and Erin Ambrose for their hard work. All Quebeckers jumped for joy when Abby Roque scored two goals.5Thanks Procedure · 7 wordsFortunately, the story does not end here.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsWe will have another chance to applaud Danièle Sauvageau’s team during Saturday’s victory parade for the Victoire in Montreal.6 Aside · 3 wordsThe victorious Victoire.Aside Positioning · 22 wordsIs there a finer or more natural role model for all those young girls who dream of taking to the ice themselves?Positioning Thanks · 18 wordsI want to thank the team for their dedication to their sport. Well done. Long live the Victoire.Thanks

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