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Fraser Tolmie

168 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
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Claims 75%Positioning 15%Reasoning 3%The ask 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 44 wordson May 19, the Minister of National Defence came to Moose Jaw, home of Canada’s Snowbirds.1 He paraded the Snowbirds team out in front of the media and used them as his backdrop. Then he announced that the team were now losing their jobs.2 Positioning · 26 wordsThis is one of the most un‑Canadian things the people of Canada have ever witnessed happen to our military, and Canadians are disappointed with this behaviour.Positioning Claims · 82 wordsThe Liberals have sat on this file for over a decade. The Tutors are being grounded after $30 million was spent to keep the jets flying until 2030.3 Both L3Harris and Magellan Aerospace have said the Tutors are safe to fly.4 Now, out of nowhere, the minister has announced a replacement aircraft that has propellers but with no timeline, no number of planes, no in-service date.5 The Snowbirds Alumni Association calls this profoundly disappointing.6 So does Moose Jaw, and so does Canada. Reasoning · 5 wordsCanadians deserve a jet team. The ask · 11 wordsThe Prime Minister can make this happen by reversing his decision.

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