Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 53%Thanks 20%Anecdote 12%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 24 wordsI rise today with a heavy heart to pay tribute to a pillar of the Mississauga community, Mrs. Anjum Begum, who recently passed away.ProcedureClaims · 29 wordsHers was a classic immigrant success story.Arriving in the 1990s, she and her life partner, prominent journalist Latafat Ali Siddiqui, built a beautiful life with their four daughters.1Thanks · 13 wordsTogether they became the heartbeat of our community, defined by philanthropy and compassion.ThanksAnecdote · 18 wordsAnjum’s heart and her kitchen were always open.No one ever left her home without a hearty meal.AnecdoteClaims · 54 wordsHer values of hard work and integrity live on through her beloved daughters, Faran, Maleeha, Dania and Leena, whose successes and contributions were one of her proudest joys in life.The massive outpouring of grief at her service last week was a true testament to who she was and the impact that she made.Thanks · 18 wordsI offer my deepest condolences to her family.May she rest in peace. [Member spoke in Arabic] [English]Thanks