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Jill McKnight

74 words · 3 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jamie Schmale (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the only people putting reconciliation at risk are the Liberal government members and that member from British Columbia, who should know better. The amount of uncertainty created in British Columbia, not just in the city of Richmond, is the result of the Liberal government’s failing to stand up for private property rights. It appealed at the last minute. It put so much uncertainty in the air. The only organization appealing for private property rights is the City of Richmond. The government has failed. It needs to do better. Will it support our Conservative motion to fix the problem the government created?”
Statement grade
C
Average 60 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 16%Promise 28%Positioning 55%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 12 wordsour colleagues across the way have brought up this issue numerous times, 1Promise · 21 wordsand we have been very clear that we will stand for private property rights and protect those rights in British Columbia.Vague promise Positioning · 41 wordsThis is about creating fear and uncertainty where it is unnecessary, and it is not helping us to move forward as a country, as a province and as a community. We are focused on defending private property rights in Canada, period.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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