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Mélanie Joly

74 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Bienvenu-Olivier Ntumba (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, our aerospace sector is an economic driver that supports thousands of skilled, well-paid jobs, particularly in Quebec. Earlier this month, Airbus and AirAsia announced the largest order in history for aircraft designed and manufactured in Canada. This is concrete proof that our strategy to diversify trade with international partners is bearing fruit. Can the Minister of Industry inform the House of the measures the government is taking to attract investment, support innovation and continue to build a stronger economy?”
Statement grade
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Average 94 / 100
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Aside 7%Thanks 11%Claims 61%Reasoning 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 5 wordsat last, a good question, AsideThanks · 8 wordsand it comes from my colleague from Mont-Saint-Bruno—L’Acadie.Thanks Claims · 45 wordsIndeed, two weeks ago we received some very good news for the aerospace sector, particularly for Airbus in Mirabel.1 There are now 150 new aircraft under construction in Mirabel.2 This is an order placed by AirAsia, a Malaysian—and therefore Asian—airline, with Airbus, a European company.3 Reasoning · 16 wordsAll of this proves that our plan is working. We are capable of attracting foreign investment.

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