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Arnold Viersen

143 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 31 wordsI assure members that I only have one petition to present today. I rise to present a petition on behalf of Canadians who are concerned about human rights protections in India.Procedure Claims · 71 wordsThe petitioners are saying that, according to the United States Commission on International Religious Freedom, various actors are supporting and enforcing sectarian policies that seek to establish India as a Hindu state.1 The petitioners say that Christians in India are being targeted by extremists vandalizing their churches, attacking church workers, 2and threatening and humiliating their congregations.3 They also note that Indian Muslims are at risk of genocide, assault and sexual violence.4 The ask · 41 wordsThe petitioners are asking that the government ensure that any and all trade deals with India are premised on mandatory human rights provisions, that extremists are sanctioned and that the government promote a respectful human rights dialogue between Canada and India.

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