“Mr. Speaker, we know the number of visits from Manitoba to the United States has actually decreased. The member made reference to the people in his constituency who are travelling to the United States in order to gas up. A quick search finds that the price of gas in Minnesota is about $1.55 a litre. That is probably within two cents or three cents of what I paid over the weekend. Does the member really believe there is a flood of people going from his constituency and travelling to Minneapolis in order to get gas?”
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Positioning 28%Claims 67%Promise 5%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsI would encourage my friend to consult a map.PositioningClaims · 52 wordsNo, they are not driving 10 hours to Minneapolis to get gasoline.They are driving right across to Walhalla or some other closer place, 1where they are seeing a tangible difference between what their credit card says they pay for gasoline north of the border and what they pay south of it.Positioning · 19 wordsPeople are not stupid.The member should not treat them like they are.They know what they are doing.PositioningClaims · 15 wordsI wish they did not have to drive to America to get more affordable gas.Promise · 5 wordsWe can fix that today.Vague promise