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Mark Gerretsen

125 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Costas Menegakis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the member has been sitting here since 2015. He stands up in his speech touting the Right Hon. Justin Trudeau’s record as if it were an accomplishment. Here is where we are today. We have the highest housing prices in the history of our country, Canada is the worst country in the G7 for food affordability and gas prices are astronomically high, but he has the audacity to stand there and talk about the accomplishments of his party over the last 11 years. Why will he not stand up, show some leadership and vote for our common-sense motion to take all gas taxes off for all Canadians for the entire year to give some real relief to Canadians, Canadian businesses and Canadian families?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 42%Claims 34%Procedure 17%Promise 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsit would be a lot easier for me to take that question seriously if the member did not belong to a political party that, PositioningClaims · 13 wordsas I demonstrated in the example I just gave, handed checks to millionaires.1 Positioning · 29 wordsNow I am supposed to suddenly expect its members to care about the affordability challenges many Canadians have. I am very proud of the work the government has done.PositioningOff point Procedure · 21 wordsCould we do things differently? Could we do things better? Is there always an opportunity to improve? Absolutely, there always is.Procedure Promise · 5 wordsI will always do that, Off pointVague promiseClaims · 29 wordsbut will I get up in the House and vote for this motion, which would benefit the ultrawealthy the most, the people who consume the most amount of fuel? Promise · 4 wordsNo, I will not.

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