Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Jagsharan Singh Mahal

1018 words · 66 sentences · 72 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 94 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 3%Claims 49%Positioning 10%Reasoning 28%The ask 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 12 wordsI will be sharing my time with the member for Cariboo—Prince George.1Procedure Claims · 16 wordsOne year ago, the community of Edmonton Southeast placed its trust in me to deliver change.2Off pointVague promise Positioning · 13 wordsAfter more than a decade of Liberal government, my community feels the effects.Positioning Claims · 19 wordsGrocery prices are sky-high, streets are unsafe and the fuel that powers their lives is more expensive than ever. Positioning · 8 wordsConservatives understand the importance of delivering common-sense solutions.Positioning Reasoning · 23 wordsThat is why this opposition day motion offers the government an opportunity to deliver relief to Canadians already struggling to make ends meet. The ask · 34 wordsConservatives call upon the Liberal government to act by immediately ending all federal taxes on gas and diesel for the rest of the year, including the GST, and permanently scrapping the clean fuel standard. Reasoning · 74 wordsFuel is not a luxury. It is an essential input into almost every part of our economy. The cars that bring our kids to school, hockey practice, soccer games and medical appointments rely on gas. The trucks that bring food to grocery store shelves rely on diesel. The farmers who grow that food rely on fuel. The planes that bring parliamentarians from coast to coast to coast into this chamber are powered by fuel. Positioning · 4 wordsThe Liberals know this.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsThe Liberals know Canada is a big country. They know millions of Canadians cannot simply stop driving to work, stop transporting goods or stop heating their homes. Positioning · 27 wordsHowever, what the Liberals do not seem to understand is the impact their policies are having on working Canadians, on seniors and on families across the country.Positioning Claims · 51 wordsIn my riding of Edmonton Southeast, I recently visited local seniors’ residences. Many residents at these seniors homes tell me the same thing: It is getting more expensive for them to visit their grandchildren and families. Seniors are having to decide between buying a tank of gas or buying fresh produce. Reasoning · 24 wordsOur seniors should not have to make the choice between a drive across town to see their grandson’s hockey game and a good meal. Positioning · 3 wordsThat is unacceptable.Positioning Claims · 37 wordsSeniors in my community worked hard, paid taxes, built this country and played by the rules. They should not be punished by a government that keeps adding costs and then acts surprised when Canadians cannot keep up. Reasoning · 17 wordsThat is why the Conservatives brought forward this motion calling on the government to adopt our plan, Claims · 16 wordswhich would suspend all federal taxes on gas and diesel until the end of the year. Positioning · 5 wordsOur plan is not complicated.Positioning Claims · 67 wordsOur plan would save Canadians up to 25¢ per litre on gas.3 That would mean about $20 every time a family fills up a minivan, 4and up to $1,200 in savings for a family of four over the year.5 The Liberals have offered only partial relief for part of the year. They suspended one tax for a limited time and then told Canadians they had already acted, 6Positioning · 5 wordsbut Canadians know the truth.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 24 wordsThey are still paying too much at the pump, too much at the grocery store and too much for the basic necessities of life. Reasoning · 85 wordsLowering fuel costs is not only about the price at the pump. It is about the cost of everything that moves this country. Lower diesel prices reduce the cost of trucking. Lower trucking costs reduce the cost of groceries. Lower grocery prices help people in all our communities across the country. When fuel becomes more expensive, everything becomes more expensive. The food on our shelves, the material used to build homes and the goods shipped across this country all cost more because fuel costs more. Claims · 36 wordsCanadian families have been experiencing this pain every day. Food prices continue to rise faster than household budgets can handle. Families are paying more for meat, vegetables and everyday groceries. The Liberals say they understand affordability. Reasoning · 15 wordsIf that is the case, then the government should have no problem supporting this motion. Claims · 21 wordsHowever, after more than 10 years, the same Liberal government continues to support policies that make life more expensive for Canadians. Procedure · 14 wordsI will give an example of how disconnected the government is from everyday Canadians.Procedure Claims · 52 wordsWhen the finance minister was asked whether the government would extend fuel tax relief, his answer to Canadians was that the Liberals had already acted. I can assure the minister that the residents of my community who are lining up at the pumps do not agree that the government has done enough. Procedure · 4 wordsThe facts are clear.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 64 wordsCanadians are paying much more at the pump than Americans, even while global oil prices affect both countries. The difference is not just about world markets. It is about higher Liberal taxes and a government that continues to take more from Canadians when they can least afford it. Other countries have understood the pressures families are facing and have moved to reduce fuel taxes. Positioning · 22 wordsMeanwhile, the Liberal government offered Canadians a half-baked solution and then congratulated itself. Canadians do not need more self-praise from Liberal ministers.Positioning Reasoning · 18 wordsThey need relief, lower costs and a government that understands that when fuel costs more, everything costs more. Positioning · 5 wordsThis motion is about fairness.Positioning Reasoning · 23 wordsAt a time when Canadians are already stretched thin, the federal government cannot continue taking more from every litre of gas and diesel. The ask · 17 wordsIt must scrap all federal taxes for a meaningful amount of time, giving working families immediate relief. Claims · 48 wordsIn my community of Edmonton Southeast, people are not asking for complicated government programs or more Liberal talking points. They are asking for a government that understands their lives and works for them. They are asking for lower costs and no longer want to feel strapped for cash. Procedure · 5 wordsI will conclude with this.Procedure Claims · 23 wordsJust over a year ago, I came to Ottawa with the intention of delivering common-sense solutions for the hard-working people of my community.Off point Reasoning · 8 wordsThis is why the motion is so important. Positioning · 14 wordsConservatives are offering a clear and practical solution to an issue facing all Canadians.Positioning The ask · 38 wordsBy ending federal taxes on gas and diesel for the rest of the year, including the GST, and permanently scrapping the clean fuel standard, members of the House can make life easier for those who need it most.

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