A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 50%Positioning 8%Reasoning 20%The ask 22%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 41 wordsthe feedback about Alto’s high-speed rail project, which is being promoted by the Liberal Party and relatives of influential ministers, has been very negative.According to Radio-Canada, some 500 farms and 1,200 landowners will be affected in the Montreal-Ottawa corridor alone.1Positioning · 13 wordsJust imagine how many people who will be expropriated over the 1,000-kilometre route.2PositioningClaims · 43 wordsConsidering our Canadian winters, this project will almost certainly run into surprises that will affect the final bill and the train’s ability to operate.There are not many such trains running in our climate, especially at cruising speeds of 300 kilometres an hour.3Reasoning · 33 wordsGoverning is about making choices, and making choices without social licence would jeopardize our private, unsubsidized means of transportation in favour of a subsidized means of transportation benefiting a handful of regular travellers.The ask · 37 wordsI urge the government to listen to the people of Canada before it is too late to turn back.If it is really looking for a good idea to support, there is always Quebec City’s third link.