Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Pat Kelly

175 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 100 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 27%Reasoning 8%Promise 6%The ask 59%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 5 wordsI am a fifth-generation Albertan, 1Reasoning · 14 wordsand I believe in the future for a strong Alberta within a united Canada. Promise · 11 wordsI will vote for Alberta to remain a province of Canada. Claims · 42 wordsHowever, members of the House must understand that many Albertans are angry, and I am one of them. We are angry that, since 2015, this Liberal government has made decisions and introduced laws that harm Alberta right up to this very day. The ask · 103 wordsNow is the time for the Prime Minister to show leadership. It is time for him to acknowledge how much harm his government has done to the unity of this country. It is time for him to show humility. It is time for contrition. It is time for action that will prove to Albertans that their federal government cares enough about Alberta to admit to its mistakes. It is time to show Alberta that Confederation works and to convince Albertans that the best is yet to come for Alberta within this great country, Canada, that so many Albertans and I love so much.

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