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Sukh Dhaliwal

101 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 24 wordsas we celebrated Africa Day yesterday, I would like to recognize the impactful work of Beyond Hoops Africa under the leadership of James Kamau.12Thanks Claims · 51 wordsRooted in Surrey’s African diaspora, this organization represents the power of community-driven development across borders. Through initiatives in Kenya, it is expanding access to clean water, building sports facilities and promoting environmental stewardship.3 Equally important, it is creating meaningful opportunities for Canadians to engage in global citizenship and support sustainable change. Positioning · 26 wordsIts work reflects the very best of collaboration, compassion and leadership, strengthening ties between Canada and Africa while empowering youth and communities toward a brighter future.Positioning

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