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Patty Hajdu

109 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians are skipping lunch because they cannot afford to pay their bills, while this Prime Minister and the Brookfield class skip their tax bills. Meanwhile, here at home, here is the reality. Equifax is out this week with a new report. This is the organization that checks the credit scores of individual Canadians. It says, “insolvency volumes have increased to levels not seen since 2009”, 18 years ago. Will the Prime Minister announce that he will reverse the inflationary, debt-ridden policies so that Canadians do not go bankrupt?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 81%Procedure 9%Positioning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 28 wordslast week I was in Marathon, Ontario, to talk about mining.1 There is a mining boom in northern Ontario, something I think these guys are not aware of.Partly on point Procedure · 10 wordsDo members know what came up over and over again?Procedure Claims · 60 wordsIt was gratitude for a government that is taking seriously the investment into natural resource extraction in northern Ontario, that is helping provinces in the country get natural resource projects off the ground, Vague promiseVague promiseUnearned certaintyand that is taking seriously the need to invest in the skilled trades workers, who, by the way, create the great jobs with pensions in hard-working environments, Partly on pointPositioning · 11 wordswhich is something I think that member does not really understand.PositioningOff point

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