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Joanne Thompson

63 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Clifford Small (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Brett Cox, a fisherman from English Harbour West, reached out to me yesterday and said, “We need the tariff gone on sea cucumber or that fishery is done.” He is referring to the 25% Chinese tariff, which still applies to all Canadian seafood except lobster and crab products. China is the second largest market for our seafood. If the Liberal Prime Minister’s new relationship with China is beneficial to Canada, why are these crippling tariffs still in place?”
Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Aside 44%Claims 37%The question 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 28 wordsI have not heard from this member since the day he called the school food program garbage, 1so it is nice to see him stand in the House.AsideOff point Claims · 23 wordsMy counterparts and I continue to work to remove tariffs, Vague promisebut the spring economic update has nearly $1 billion for small craft harbours.2Partly on point The question · 12 wordsI want to ask the member, will he vote to support this?Off point

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