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Rob Moore

106 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Chris Lewis (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, I have spoken at length, almost ad nauseam, with young adults in Essex. Basically, it has come to a point now where they are saying it is not even worth trying to save for a home. What I really found interesting was when the member talked about what we would say to the person at the gas pump. That really resonated with me. What is the message? What is the proper message? What do I send back to these young adults who are just trying to get ahead in Canada?”
Statement grade
A
Average 90 / 100
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Claims 60%Promise 21%The ask 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 64 wordslike my hon. colleague in his riding, in my riding we also hear from young people who have given up hope on the Canadian dream, Partly on pointwhich is to own their own home, to raise a family here in Canada, to have a good job, to be able to save up some money and, heaven forbid, to be able to fill their car with gas. Promise · 22 wordsWhat I would say is that help is on its way.Vague promise Conservatives will keep fighting for affordability and fighting for those families.Vague promise The ask · 20 wordsWe are calling on the government today to adopt our motion to end the tax on fuel for this year.1

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