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Ali Ehsassi

161 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Grant Jackson (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, that was a lesson in obfuscation that would give even the Manitoba provincial NDP a run for their money, and that is saying something. My colleague from Winnipeg North will know what I am talking about. The member did eventually get to domestic food production at about minute three in that response, but the vast majority of what he talked about was grocery benefits that will not help farmers and producers grow more food domestically. That needs to be more than just a footnote at the very end of the government’s responses. It needs to be the primary focus. More supply means cheaper groceries and produce at the store. If there were a small greenhouse benefit, there may be some merit to that, but there needs to be far more done by the government to increase domestic food production. We see it happening when government acts appropriately. The previous PC government in Manitoba provided the right tax incentives to Vermillion Growers in Dauphin. It has set up a massive tomato greenhouse in rural Manitoba in the Parkland region, which is growing year-round, providing fresh produce to Manitobans and those in eastern Saskatchewan. These things can be done if they are done appropriately. How much longer does the government want to take?”
Statement grade
D
49 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 73%Claims 18%Reasoning 9%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 13 wordsI am not quite sure what he means when he talks about obfuscating.Positioning Claims · 12 wordsI listed a number of measures that have been introduced by government. Reasoning · 15 wordsIf the member chooses to ignore them, then I cannot possibly be charged with obfuscating.Partly on point Positioning · 50 wordsIt is interesting that the member claims to care about food, but he does not seem to find it within himself to support any of those programs that I listed for him, whether it is the Canada child benefit or cutting taxes for Canadians and providing timely and meaningful supports.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsHe has also, I would say, voted against the national school food program to feed hungry children.1 Positioning · 54 wordsOf course, he does not think much of that program.Off point With many people feeling the strain of rising everyday expenses, our government will continue to take responsible and pragmatic approaches.Partly on pointVague promise While conservatives will focus on slogans and social media clips, we are tackling long-term structural challenges.Off pointVague promise We are acting now to support all Canadians.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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