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Dean Allison

207 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 70 wordsas a member of Parliament, I attend some fantastic events with some of the most amazing people in the world. Shine On was one such event, held on a beautiful Niagara evening. It was hosted by John Howard of Megalomaniac winery, 1and we could feel right away that it was something special. It really spoke to the kind of community we have and that I am so proud to represent.Anecdote Claims · 56 wordsWhat stood out most to me at the event was the leadership from Kevin and Linda Luttjehuizen and their daughter Kaitlyn. Kevin and Linda are proud owners of Harmony Jewellers.2 They have raised over $1 million for the West Lincoln Memorial Hospital Foundation and McNally House Hospice, two of the most important organizations in our community.3 Thanks · 9 wordsWhat an incredible contribution that is by this family.Thanks Claims · 55 wordsThis year marks the 50th anniversary of Harmony Jewellers.4 After five decades of support from the community, they are making sure they return that support in a meaningful way. Given the challenges that Harmony Jewellers and its staff have faced over the past year, seeing that kind of generosity and resilience on display was remarkable. Anecdote · 17 wordsIt was one of those nights that remind us of what our community is really all about.Anecdote

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