Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Rhonda Kirkland

130 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Procedure 11%Claims 69%The ask 17%Thanks 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI rise today to recognize one of Oshawa’s most cherished annual traditions, Fiesta Week.Procedure Claims · 70 wordsFor 52 years, Fiesta Week has brought our community together through cultural performances, traditional foods, costumes and displays from around the world.2 This year, residents and visitors will once again experience long-standing Greek, Caribbean, French Canadian, Polish, German, Ukrainian, Portuguese, Italian and Romanian pavilions.3 We are also proud to welcome the new Indian pavilion and welcome back the Hungarian pavilion.4 Volunteers work all year long preparing for this week-long celebration. The ask · 22 wordsI encourage everyone to join us in Oshawa from June 21 to 27 to experience 14 incredible cultural pavilions in our city.1 Claims · 20 wordsThe doors are open, and people do not want to miss it. Follow along with Oshawa Fiesta Week on Facebook. Thanks · 4 wordsHappy Fiesta Week, Oshawa.Thanks

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