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John Barlow

187 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI rise today to remember the remarkable life of the iconic Albertan Don Seaman.Procedure Claims · 131 wordsHis influence in Alberta and all of Canada will be felt for generations, especially by his friends and family and by the business leaders he mentored. A visionary pioneer of Alberta’s energy sector, Don helped build Canada’s economy, but his impact will reach far beyond business. In the true spirit of “build it and they will come”, Don helped build a field of dreams in Okotoks, where Seaman Stadium is the crown jewel of Canadian baseball. He literally placed the building blocks not only of a stadium but also of the renowned Okotoks Dawgs Baseball program, 3which stands as a proud symbol of his commitment to youth, sport and country. Through the Donald and Eleanor Seaman Family Foundation, he supported education, health care and community development, 2and he improved countless lives. Anecdote · 42 wordsNow as we celebrate Don’s beloved Dawgs’ 20th baseball season in Okotoks, I will remember him sitting in the warm summer sun watching baseball, savouring a life well lived with thousands of friends in what we now call our field of dreams.1Anecdote

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