Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Terry Sheehan

138 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 88 / 100
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Procedure 6%Claims 70%Positioning 22%Thanks 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsI have some great news for the House.Procedure Claims · 57 wordsOn Friday the Minister of Industry joined me at Tenaris, 1and we announced over $70 million in funding towards a project that is going to maintain 811 jobs and is also going to create 200 new jobs.23 As members know, I was elected in 2015, 4and when I was elected, Tenaris had only 25 people working there.5 Positioning · 16 wordsIt lay the blame squarely on the previous government for lack of inaction on supporting steel.Positioning Claims · 39 wordsHowever, today we are celebrating 1,111 workers who are working to support Canada to become the energy superpower the Prime Minister has said we will be, 6and the Tenaris workers are going to make that vision become a reality. Positioning · 15 wordsLet us celebrate the success in front of the tariffs and this unjust, unreasonable situation.Positioning Thanks · 3 wordsI congratulate Tenaris.Thanks

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