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181 words · 10 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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Anecdote 15%Positioning 20%Claims 44%The ask 21%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 27 wordsjust the other day, while I was filling up on gas in Stoney Creek, a member of my community commented on how ridiculous these gas prices are, AnecdotePositioning · 6 wordsand I could not agree more.Positioning Claims · 75 wordsGas prices are 10% higher in Canada than they are in the United States, 1which is costing Canadians an average of 16¢ more per litre.2 Canadians want relief. The Liberal finance minister says they have already acted, but they have only acted on one-third of the taxes for one-third of the year.3 Our Conservative plan to remove all Liberal taxes on gas and diesel would save a family of four in Hamilton $1,200 per year.4 The ask · 16 wordsIf the Liberals support our Conservative motion today, we could bring real relief at the pumps.Vague promise Claims · 5 wordsIt is what Canadians want, Positioning · 30 wordsbut more importantly, it is what Canadians deserve. Canadians have been getting squeezed for way too long, and this is a great opportunity to put money back in their pockets.Positioning The ask · 22 wordsLet us do the right thing today and vote yes for our Conservative motion. Let us give Canadians the win they deserve.

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