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Steven MacKinnon

66 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, while families are wondering how they will pay for their groceries each month, this Liberal Prime Minister continues to max out the national credit card to fund one scandal after another: $300 million wasted on PrescribeIT, $200 million on a space project located on land that cost next to nothing, $742 million on confiscating firearms from law-abiding hunters. The result: higher costs, higher taxes, higher debt and higher inflation. Gas prices have soared by 28.6%. Grocery bills continue to stretch families thin. When will this Liberal Prime Minister put a stop to his credit card budgets?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 58%Positioning 30%Promise 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 38 wordsearly this morning, even before this MP or his colleagues rose to speak, Canada announced that we are back in the business of building military jets.1 We also announced that we are exporting liquefied natural gas to Europe.2 Positioning · 20 wordsThese are incredible partnerships with Europe. These are incredible partnerships that will create jobs and opportunities right here in Canada.Positioning Promise · 8 wordsThat is how we will build a country.Off pointVague promise

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