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Joanne Thompson

48 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Carol Anstey (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians do not want empty promises and empty announcements. The minister can deflect, but the reality is that rent has skyrocketed. After years of costly Liberal housing failures, energy prices rise because the Liberal government’s identity is to punish Canadian energy and target regular families. With the Liberal Prime Minister, it is more costs, more inflation and more of the same. He is just another Liberal. Will he finally admit that his tax-and-spend agenda has failed, stop using the credit card and support the Conservative plan to make Canada affordable again?”
Statement grade
D+
53 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 40%Positioning 27%The ask 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI have good news for that member.Procedure Claims · 10 wordsThere is almost $1 billion for a small craft harbours.1 Positioning · 13 wordsThe member may not speak to her constituents, but they speak to me.Positioning Claims · 9 wordsThey are excited. They see this as an opportunity. The ask · 9 wordsI invite the member to speak to her constituents.Off point

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