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Steven MacKinnon

73 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians were billed $195,000 for inflight catering for the Prime Minister for three trips: Scottish salmon fillet, sautéed beef with world-famous creamy sauce and, for dessert, luxury Normandy butter cups. Every dollar the Prime Minister spends on his elite palate was first taken from a hard-working Canadian. This Prime Minister means more costs, more taxes, more debt and more on the national credit card. Will he cut out his fine dining and rein in his inflationary spending, so Canadians can afford to eat?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 30%Claims 70%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordswhen the Prime Minister travels, does the member know what happens?Positioning Claims · 42 wordsHe brings back jobs. He brings back investment. He brings back opportunity for indigenous people to participate with equity in projects. He brings back technology. He brings back expertise. He brings back military and industrial benefits to Canada. The Prime Minister travels. Positioning · 11 wordsOh yes, he does, and do members know what he does?Positioning Claims · 9 wordsHe brings back jobs, investment and energy to Canada.Partly on point

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