“Mr. Speaker, the Liberal minister just told Canadians to feel safer because they proposed a band-aid for a system they broke. Canadians do not need another paper promise. They need to be safe in their own homes. The Liberal government’s soft-on-crime laws let repeat offenders walk free and come right back through Canadians’ front doors. Police are forced to arrest the same offenders again and again because the system keeps letting them out. Criminals are not getting the message and are getting bolder because they know they will not face real consequences. A system that will not keep them behind bars is not protection. It is failure. It is like putting a screen door on a submarine; it is completely useless. When will they shut down this revolving door and start protecting Canadians?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 55 wordswe are strengthening penalties and we are giving law enforcement the tools they need to catch criminals.Vague promiseJust last week, Peel Regional Police arrested over 65 individuals connected to organized retail crime.1These are criminals who were going out and looting our small businesses.We are working to make sure that bail laws are strengthened.Vague promisePositioning · 13 wordsDo members know who has been getting in the way?The Conservatives have.PositioningClaims · 21 wordsTime and time again, police chiefs across the country are telling us they need the tools in Bill C-22 and the—