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Buckley Belanger

85 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jeremy Patzer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Secretary of State for Rural Development, the only Liberal MP in Saskatchewan, called the grounding of the Snowbirds and the potential loss— Some hon. members: Oh, oh! Mr. Speaker, the Secretary of State for Rural Development, the only Liberal MP in Saskatchewan, called the grounding of the Snowbirds and the potential loss of 80 jobs a very, very joyous and happy event. Given his track record for 26 years as an MLA, including eight as a cabinet minister for the NDP, this is not surprising. He destroyed our province for a generation, and he is living up to that record so far in his first term in Ottawa. The Snowbirds are a Canadian icon, so why are the Liberals not keeping their promise and keeping this national symbol?”
Statement grade
F
31 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 15%Positioning 54%Claims 31%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 13 wordsmore Liberals from Saskatchewan are coming, so the cavalry is on its way.Aside Positioning · 36 wordsWe will take no lessons from the Conservatives over there.Off point Why?Partly on point Because they did nothing for 10 long years. Since their absence from Saskatchewan to come over here and do nothing, what has happened back home?Positioning Claims · 26 wordsThis headline reads, “Saskatchewan Value Added Agricultural Revenue Reaches Record $8.4 Billion”, 1which is twice as much as 10 years ago when you guys left Saskatchewan, 2Positioning · 10 wordsso we will not take any lessons from you guys—PositioningOff point

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