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Jasraj Hallan

133 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to John-Paul Danko (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, when the member and several others opposite stand up, it is often the same string of hyperbole and cynicism that we hear over and over again. I often think about how sad it would be to live in a world that is that cynical all the time about everything. I grew up in Canada’s steel city, Hamilton. My family worked in the steel industry. Steel is in our blood. I want to give the member opposite the opportunity to acknowledge the harm that Donald Trump and his illegal and unjustified tariff war against Canada have caused to Canada’s economy.”
Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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The ask 35%Positioning 32%Claims 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

The ask · 20 wordsFirst of all, Mr. Speaker, the member can tell his Prime Minister that steel is still used around the world.Partly on point Positioning · 10 wordsHis Prime Minister does not believe anyone even uses steel.PositioningOff point The ask · 21 wordsSecond of all, he can tell his Prime Minister to remove the industrial carbon tax that gets put on that steel.1Partly on point Positioning · 27 wordsThe member, in particular, is completely out of touch. His government is completely out of touch.Off point It is his government that has caused the pain to Canadians.Positioning Claims · 43 wordsDonald Trump did not impose a carbon tax on Canadians.2 Donald Trump is not the one who made Canada’s permitting process the second-worst in the entire OECD.3 Donald Trump is not the one who is sending more and more Canadians to food banks.4 Positioning · 6 wordsIt is the out-of-touch Liberal government, PositioningThe ask · 6 wordsand he should apologize for that.Off point

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